一篇英文小记,麻烦帮我看一下有没有错误
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一篇英文小记,麻烦帮我看一下有没有错误
When you're a little boy,you,re very naughty.Though sometimes everyone gets fed up with you,you're lovely beacuse a little child should be what mostly people think that it is .
When you had grow up ,you beacome a rebel .Like other rebels,you have been turning a deaf ear to your parents.I wonder what is in your mind?In fact ,i long to konw you.
A few days ago ,you left home .Everyone is worried about you whether you know.Why did you do?You said you want to live for yourself; as long as you,re happy yourself ,everything is not important .Really?Nothing important?I wonder what is in your mind?I can,t get it .
You're not a boy any longer.You have your own views about things around you ,but i ,m scared that you get lost .
When you're a little boy,you,re very naughty.Though sometimes everyone gets fed up with you,you're lovely beacuse a little child should be what mostly people think that it is .
When you had grow up ,you beacome a rebel .Like other rebels,you have been turning a deaf ear to your parents.I wonder what is in your mind?In fact ,i long to konw you.
A few days ago ,you left home .Everyone is worried about you whether you know.Why did you do?You said you want to live for yourself; as long as you,re happy yourself ,everything is not important .Really?Nothing important?I wonder what is in your mind?I can,t get it .
You're not a boy any longer.You have your own views about things around you ,but i ,m scared that you get lost .
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When you're a little boy,you,re very naughty.Though sometimes everyone gets fed up with you,you're lovely because a little child should be what mostly people think that it is .
When you grew up ,you became a rebel .Like other rebels,you have been turning a deaf ear to your parents.I wonder what is in your mind?In fact ,I long to konw you.
A few days ago ,you left home .Everyone is worried about you whether you know or not.Why did you do it?You said you want to live for yourself; as long as you,re happy yourself ,everything is not important .Really?Nothing important?I wonder what is it in your mind?I can,t get it .
You're not a boy any longer.You have your own views about things around you ,but I ,m scared that you get lost .
When you grew up ,you became a rebel .Like other rebels,you have been turning a deaf ear to your parents.I wonder what is in your mind?In fact ,I long to konw you.
A few days ago ,you left home .Everyone is worried about you whether you know or not.Why did you do it?You said you want to live for yourself; as long as you,re happy yourself ,everything is not important .Really?Nothing important?I wonder what is it in your mind?I can,t get it .
You're not a boy any longer.You have your own views about things around you ,but I ,m scared that you get lost .