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"What kind of talents is a successful leader?" This is an eternal no unified the answers to questions in different time,place and situations,the path of successful leaders will have different,even on Sunday.
Leaders first is a designer,create for yourself display their talent to the best environment and conditions.Then he should have forecast and developmental vision.Secondly,he is a server,and serve the humanness is profit.Then he should have selflessness and selfless quality.Again he should be a imparted the technology,innovation,who taught in others,let them benefit.Then he should have stronger keenness and selfless spirit.
I want to be an unwavering courage,a strong sense of justice,strong determination,selfless dedication,charming personality,responsibility,rich cooperation spirit,have decisive decision-making power leader.I for the ideal and unremitting efforts!
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"What kind of talents is a successful leader?" There is no unified and lasting answers the question,in different time,place and,under the situation of successful leaders on the road will have different difficulties.
Leaders first is a designer,create for yourself display their talent to the best environment and conditions.Then,he should have forecast and developing foreground.Second,he is a service person,has the human spirit of devotion.Then,he should be a selfless man.He should be a impart technology,innovation,who taught in other countries,let them benefit.Then he should have stronger enthusiasm and selfless spirit.
I want to be an unwavering courage,have a strong sense of justice,have strong determination,selfless dedication,character charm,responsible,have rich spirit of cooperation,plays a decisive decision-making authority leader.I would be ideal,but unremitting efforts
“什么样的人才是一个成功的领导者?”这是没有统一而永恒的的答案的问题,在不同的时间、地点和的情况下,成功的领导人的道路上也会有不同的困难.
领导人首先是一个设计师,为自己创造发挥自己才能最好的环境和条件.然后,他应该有预测和发展愿景.第二,他是一个服务人,有为人奉献的精神.然后,他应该是一个无私的人.他又应该是一个传授技术、创新,是谁教会在其他国家,让他们效益.然后他应有较强的热情和无私的精神.
我想成为一名坚定不移的有勇气,有强烈的正义感、有顽强的意志、无私奉献、个性魅力、负责任、有丰富的合作精神,起着决定性的决策权的领袖.我会为理想而不懈努力!
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