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这篇英语作文语法顺序对不对 如 注:已去过
Going to the zoo
I want to the zoo.There had many animals.
First,I saw zebra.It was exciting.Next,I climbed Monkey mountain.It was tiring.
Then,I saw lions.It was frightening.After that,I saw panda.It was interesting.I very like panda.
这篇英语作文语法顺序对不对 如 注:已去过
A Trip to the Zoo (原题目不妥哈)
Last weekend,I went to the zoo.(这里估计LZ是打错字了,去动物园用go的过去式went,want是想要的意思了)
There were many animals.(这里用there be的句型,表示某地有某物)
First,I went to see zebras.(zebra是可数名词,不能以单数形式单独存在,即是要么用它的复数,要么前面加冠词才行.这里选择用名词复数形式,表示一类事物)
I went ot climb to the monkey mountain.(猴山前面要加the)
I saw pandas.(这里也是要用复数,表一类事物)
I like pandas very much/ a lot.(表示非常喜欢,very much或是a lot要放后面,不能放like前面哈.)
再问: First, I went to see zebras【see不用过去式吗】. (zebra是可数名词,不能以单数形式单独存在,即是要么用它的复数,要么前面加冠词才行。这里选择用名词复数形式,表示一类事物)
再答: 亲,你仔细看下,我改了你的句子了哦。这里我用了go to do sth,是过去式,所以go变went了,成了went to see...哈
再问: 请回答一下go to do sth是什么 (我无知了)
再答: go to do sth就是去做什么事情呀,字面上的事情哦。你是要在动物园里逛,想说先去看了什么,再看了什么之类的,对吧?那么我觉得第一个看还是加上方向动词go更加生动些哦,也可以避免句子过短,还有就是重复太多次同一句型。