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您好!我想让您帮我修改以下我的作文,100分能给我多少分,我还能在哪方面查漏补缺,
Recently,most kinds of recreation activities that more and more people had advantage and disadvantage .As colleage student ,I'm concerned that it's more advantage Of course ,Everyone have themself opinion and suggest and people denfine recreation activities is difference.In addtion ,some people like stay at domitery everyday but look for food outside and play others sometime.The recreation activities should be them looking for themself .It's essential that colleage students nowadays.what's more ,one aspect ,made students and others feeling better for emotion .other aspect ,made people closely people when they face to face in time .可能写的不太好,但是我还是用心写了.请多给点建议,
您好!我想让您帮我修改以下我的作文,100分能给我多少分,我还能在哪方面查漏补缺,
我怎么感觉像机器翻译的@_@ 你这篇文章错误真的不少,很多都是基础错误,比如这句“As college student”冠词跑哪去了?这几天我在忙着准备考试,我下星期一就考完了!到时候帮你详细解答.