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I like collecting baseball cards.Because I think it's beautiful and I like baseball a lot. I have collectedabout 40 baseball cards. When I have new baseball cards,Iwill be very happy. And I hope I can collect 500cards in the future. 老师，帮改一下，
解题思路： 语句是否通顺,句子是否符合逻辑,有无语法错误.
解题过程：
I like collecting baseball cards because I think they're beautiful . and I like baseball a lot. I have collected about 40 baseball cards. When I have new baseball cards,I will be very happy. And I hope I can collect 500 cards in the future.
语句很流畅,基本无语法错误.需要指出的是第一句的原因状语从句如果主句在前,从句不需要用逗号隔开.红体字是需要改动的地方.写的不错.加油啊!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
I like collecting baseball cards because I think they're beautiful . and I like baseball a lot. I have collected about 40 baseball cards. When I have new baseball cards,I will be very happy. And I hope I can collect 500 cards in the future.
语句很流畅,基本无语法错误.需要指出的是第一句的原因状语从句如果主句在前,从句不需要用逗号隔开.红体字是需要改动的地方.写的不错.加油啊!
最终答案：略