英语翻译我最喜欢的科目就是英语.我的英语老师李超是一个很受同学喜爱的老师,我也很喜欢她.她的英文名Yolanda,她很年

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我最喜欢的科目就是英语.我的英语老师李超是一个很受同学喜爱的老师,我也很喜欢她.她的英文名Yolanda,她很年轻,虽然她人看起来很瘦弱,可是力气却不小.她上课很有意思,经常会和我们互动,而且她讲课幽默风趣,让我们有新鲜感.她在课下会和我们打成一片（关系好的意思就行.）,是我们的大朋友.课下她也会和我们开玩笑,讨论最新的电影或者其他有趣的话题,我们聊得都很投机.课后她还会帮我们补习,作业完成的不好的她是绝不放过.所以我们在Yolanda的带领下把英语学好了,玩的也很开心.每次在课上她都很仔细地给我们每一个句型每一个语法,有时候还会给我们讲一些小故事,所以她的课堂一直很活跃.
我们很喜欢Yolanda不仅仅是因为她风趣幽默还因为她的英语很好.我们学习的英语句型语法哪怕再长再难,只要他给我们讲就会变得简单易懂!她还会一些日语,有时候问她一个词语用日语怎么说时她都会反问‘你知道这个词用英语怎么说吗?’.这样下来我们不仅学会了英语单词,日语也会了不少.
这就是我的英语老师--------------------Yolanda

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My favourate subject is English. My English teach, Li Chao is a popular teacher among the students and I like her a lot myself too. Her English name is Yolanda. She's young and full of energy. Though she's a slim lady, she gets lots of strength. Her class is very interesting, she always lets us take a part in her class. Also her class is full of humor which make us want to learn more. After class she likes to play with us just like our friends. She likes to talk jokes with us, discussing the new movies or other interesting topics. So we all love to talk with her. After class she helps us improve our study as well. If anyone dont do their homework well she will not just ignore them. Therefore under Yolanda's help we all study English happily and promotly. Every class she explains gramma and sentense patterns clarefully. Sometimes she may tell some small story as well. So her class is always active and interesting.
We like Yolanda is not only because she has sense of humor but also because her English is so good. We can learn very complex sentance patterns because she always gives us easy explaination for us to understand. In addtion, she also speaks some Japanese. Sometimes if we ask her how to speak a word in Japanese she will ask us"Do you know how to speak this word in English?". Therefore we can learn lots of English words while we learn Japanese.
This is my English teach who we like so much-- Yolanda.
建议把作文结构重新组织一下,内容很丰富,不错,但是感觉稍显凌乱没有层次感：-）