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自己写的 帮看看有什么错误
When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photographs with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who were involved in some special cases .I suppose the day like that makes me delighted and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life.
麻烦帮看看时态有没有什么问题 有没有什么语法错误 或者更好的说法
第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉?
自己写的 帮看看有什么错误
When I was a student, I was eager to be a journalist. Every morning I get (got) assignments from the editor and go (went) out to take some unforgettable
photographs with a professional photographer who
(would) assist me in finishing the task. And I (had) interviews (with) some people who were involved in some special cases .
I (believe that ) the (time I spent) like that made me enjoyable,
and the job as a journalist is admirable and unusual in my life.
再问: And I (had) interviews (with) some people who .... 为什么要用 had 不用would? 直接用interview 加sb.作宾语不行吗?为什么用with? 谢谢你 你的回答真好!
再答: had 在这里更表示你是的确做了采访, 以避免和 would的可能去采访混淆。 直接用interview 加sb.作宾语是可行的, 但前面用了had 就要做这样的修改
再问: 改成 and my job was to interview some people who...行吗 ?
再答: 好的