英语作文改错Today, I saw a man in the street. His body was dirty.

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英语作文改错
Today, I saw a man in the street. His body was dirty. His hair was dirty and long. His clothes were broken and old. He sat on the ground and had a bowl in front of him. There were a few pieces of money in the bowl. I thought he is（is需要换成过去式吗） very poor. So I took only five yuan into his bowl. As the saying goes "send person rose, the hand leaves lingering fragrance". So I felt very happy.
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is 要改成was
因为一开始第一句你是写 I saw a man 用的是过去式,已经明确告诉人家这是已经发生的事
有可能他现在已经不穷了,可能今天就用你给他的钱买彩票中大奖了
再问：顺便看看全文哪里还需要修改
再答：其他的不用改了,看得明白,没明显错处,不然改多了,返而给人感觉不是你写的了

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