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帮改篇英语作文,高考标准,并且把错误指出,
以match winner loser result 为关键词写自己的经历和感受.
When I was a elementary student,so much younger than today,I actively attend a 400m match.In an effort to win this match,I bought new shoes and practise very hard.I spared no efforts in doing it and neglectd my core subjects.The sweats can powerfully prove my efforts and the action can give me power.I belive in it that :Practise makes perfect.Hard as I tried,I failed to win the match .I can't accept the reality in the first place.I wondered why I didn't win the game.Fortunately,my inner strength gradually weather the result and I didn't commit suicide..From my perspective,the result isn't so important and it is justified for us to enjoy the process.Sometimes be a loser maybe help us be a winner.
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以match winner loser result 为关键词写自己的经历和感受.
When I was a elementary student,so much younger than today,I actively attend a 400m match.In an effort to win this match,I bought new shoes and practise very hard.I spared no efforts in doing it and neglectd my core subjects.The sweats can powerfully prove my efforts and the action can give me power.I belive in it that :Practise makes perfect.Hard as I tried,I failed to win the match .I can't accept the reality in the first place.I wondered why I didn't win the game.Fortunately,my inner strength gradually weather the result and I didn't commit suicide..From my perspective,the result isn't so important and it is justified for us to enjoy the process.Sometimes be a loser maybe help us be a winner.
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文章写的很好,有多种句型,倒装句很加分.就有一些小错误,纯属个人意见.不喜勿喷哟
1.when I was a elementary student, 这个句子没有错误,但是一般表达最好用：when I was in elementary/primary school
2.practise very hard,有语法错误,未用过去式,and前是bought,应该是practised
3.sweat 汗水是不可数名词
4.powerfully prove my efforts,这句中的efforts 应把S去掉
5.I can't accept 应改为I couldn't accept
6.Fortunately后面这句,大概想表达：我内心渐渐平静下来,无论结果如何,我都不会自杀.可以这样表达：I come down gradually .Weather the result was,I wouldn't commit suicide.
1.when I was a elementary student, 这个句子没有错误,但是一般表达最好用：when I was in elementary/primary school
2.practise very hard,有语法错误,未用过去式,and前是bought,应该是practised
3.sweat 汗水是不可数名词
4.powerfully prove my efforts,这句中的efforts 应把S去掉
5.I can't accept 应改为I couldn't accept
6.Fortunately后面这句,大概想表达：我内心渐渐平静下来,无论结果如何,我都不会自杀.可以这样表达：I come down gradually .Weather the result was,I wouldn't commit suicide.
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