搜搜考试网求各路大神修改语法错误
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求各路大神修改语法错误
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for your mail,we offer reasonably calculated,but our first cooperation,encourage the development of enterprises,after our senior leadership to discuss the exact calculation.we agree with you,and a 10% reduction in the original price,We hope you can fell our sincerity.Your order will be given our immediate attention.
Best regards
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for your mail,we offer reasonably calculated,but our first cooperation,encourage the development of enterprises,after our senior leadership to discuss the exact calculation.we agree with you,and a 10% reduction in the original price,We hope you can fell our sincerity.Your order will be given our immediate attention.
Best regards
呃,你能直接提供中文么?第一句因为语法的问题不知道句意了,很难正确改出来,你看看这样是否还是原意吧：
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for your mail, we could offer a reasonably calculated reductionen to courage the development of enterprises. Since this is our first time cooperation, I can get back to you after our senior leaders have a consensus of the exact calculation.
We agree with you that a 10% reduction in the original price would be appropriate. We hope this could express our sincerity.Your order will have our immediate attention.
Best regards
再问： 中文意思很高兴收到您的邮件，我们的报价是经过合理计算的，这是我们的第一次合作，为了鼓励企业的发展，经过我们公司的计算部的精确计算，我们公司同意贵公司的意见，在原来的价格上削减10%，我们希望贵公司能感受到我们的诚意，并很期待贵公司的订单。 最好的问候！
再答： Thank you for your mail. Our offer has been calculated reasonablely, and since this is our first time cooperation,we could offer a price break to courage the development of our coorperative enterprises. After a refined calcuation,we agree with you that a 10% reduction in the original price would be appropriate. We hope this could express our sincerity.Your order will have our immediate attention. Best regards
Dear Sir or Madam,
Thank you for your mail, we could offer a reasonably calculated reductionen to courage the development of enterprises. Since this is our first time cooperation, I can get back to you after our senior leaders have a consensus of the exact calculation.
We agree with you that a 10% reduction in the original price would be appropriate. We hope this could express our sincerity.Your order will have our immediate attention.
Best regards
再问： 中文意思很高兴收到您的邮件，我们的报价是经过合理计算的，这是我们的第一次合作，为了鼓励企业的发展，经过我们公司的计算部的精确计算，我们公司同意贵公司的意见，在原来的价格上削减10%，我们希望贵公司能感受到我们的诚意，并很期待贵公司的订单。 最好的问候！
再答： Thank you for your mail. Our offer has been calculated reasonablely, and since this is our first time cooperation,we could offer a price break to courage the development of our coorperative enterprises. After a refined calcuation,we agree with you that a 10% reduction in the original price would be appropriate. We hope this could express our sincerity.Your order will have our immediate attention. Best regards