搜搜考试网一封英文交友信,帮我修改一下语法错误谢谢.
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一封英文交友信,帮我修改一下语法错误谢谢.
Dear friend,
My name is Leo.My Chinese name is Yuanhong Tan.I am eleven years old.And I am a student of Jiaxiang foreign language school.My favorite subject of school is math,although some students think the math is too difficult for them. But I think it's a fun subject. What subject is your favorite?
And then,can we talking about our hometown?I live in Chengdu(of China,you know...).Chengdu is a beautiful city,do you know the panda?It's a lovely animal right?And the first panda is found in Chengdu.If you come here,you must go to the giant panda protection base of our city.
Our city is a gourmet capital too.Chafing dish,dumplings Long,Lai's rice ball and Dan Dan noodles is very delicious and famous here.
Could you introduce your home town to me?
Contact:
Email:uicfan@gmail.com
iMessage(iOS 5 of iDevice have it)account:huqing2008@126.com
Write soon,
Leo
Dear friend,
My name is Leo.My Chinese name is Yuanhong Tan.I am eleven years old.And I am a student of Jiaxiang foreign language school.My favorite subject of school is math,although some students think the math is too difficult for them. But I think it's a fun subject. What subject is your favorite?
And then,can we talking about our hometown?I live in Chengdu(of China,you know...).Chengdu is a beautiful city,do you know the panda?It's a lovely animal right?And the first panda is found in Chengdu.If you come here,you must go to the giant panda protection base of our city.
Our city is a gourmet capital too.Chafing dish,dumplings Long,Lai's rice ball and Dan Dan noodles is very delicious and famous here.
Could you introduce your home town to me?
Contact:
Email:uicfan@gmail.com
iMessage(iOS 5 of iDevice have it)account:huqing2008@126.com
Write soon,
Leo
有问题的句子：
I am eleven years old.And I am a student of Jiaxiang foreign language school.
其中的“Jiaxiang foreign language school”开头第一个字母,要大写!
还有“My favorite subject of school is math”中的“of school”要去掉,因为是多余 .
“although some students think the math is too difficult for them.”后面要加“to learn ”
"But I think it's a fun subject."改为But I think it is very interesting.好点~
“What subject is your favorite?”改为What is your favorite subject
Could you introduce your home town to me?中的 home town 要连着写.
“Write soon,”最好改为Best wishes.
I am eleven years old.And I am a student of Jiaxiang foreign language school.
其中的“Jiaxiang foreign language school”开头第一个字母,要大写!
还有“My favorite subject of school is math”中的“of school”要去掉,因为是多余 .
“although some students think the math is too difficult for them.”后面要加“to learn ”
"But I think it's a fun subject."改为But I think it is very interesting.好点~
“What subject is your favorite?”改为What is your favorite subject
Could you introduce your home town to me?中的 home town 要连着写.
“Write soon,”最好改为Best wishes.