OUR NEW YEAR

OUR NEW YEAR
First,we clean our house and sweep away had luck.Then,we paint doors and windows red.It means good luck.We usually decorate the doors and windows with paper cuts.We buy some new clothes.On New Year's Day,we put on new clothes and visit our family and friends.The family have dinner and we eat Jiaozi -- a kind of dumpling,or a sweet rice pudding.At midnight,there are usually fireworks.
OUR PLANS IN NEW YEAR
In my family,everyone has a New Year's plan.My father is going to find a good job and make more money.My mother is going to work hard and look after our family well.My brother and my sister are going to study hard and get good results,and go to a good university.I am going to get good results,too.And I am going to Disneyland.We are going to go to the Great Wall.
I AM A GUIDE
Hello!Welcome to Nanning.Nanning is famous for green trees,so it is called Green City.This is a beautiful city.In Nanning the hills are all green and the water is all clear.It has 4 million people.There are lots of skyscrapers in Nanning.So,we like Nanning best.
HOW TO GET A GOOD MARK
Hi,Jack,
Nice to hear from you.You got a bad mark in Chinese.I am going to give you some advice.You should do more practice for maths.Why don't you go to library to read some books about history and Chinese.How about listening to the radio,reading newspaper and watching Chinese films in English.You should have a notebook and write the new works down and read them every day.Try to speak more Chinese in your class.
Good luck!
Yours,
Philip
A POSTCARD
Dear Mum,
Greetings from London!
How are you?We are enjoying the school trip.Some people are swimming.Some people are shopping now.At the moment,my friend is listening to music.I am taking photos and eating ice cream.My another friend is visiting the zoo.Some people are watching ballet now.Most people are playing football and playing basketball.See you soon.
WHAT CAN I DO FOR THE GREEEN OLYMPICS?
Beijing will hold the 29th Olympics Games.It will be Green Olympics.As students,we must do something for the Green Olympics.We mustn't throw the rubbish away.We can't draw pitures on the wall.We want to plant more flowers and trees in our country.I think our country will become cleaner and more beautiful than any other country.Many foreign visitors will come to Beijing Olympics Games.I love Beijing.I love China.
MY SCHOOL DAY
I go to school at seven o'clock.I have breakfast at half past seven.Lessons start at eight o'clock.We have Chinese,English,History and Maths.I have lunch at five past twelve.I often play football in the afternoon.I have dinner at half past six.In the evening,I do my homework at eight o'clock.I go to bed at ten o'clock.
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1 had luck -------- bad luck
2 family 建议用 relatives
3 We are going to go to the Great Wall.---will go to 结构
4 Why don't you go to library to read some books about history and Chinese.-------- history 大写 History
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不妨多用点不同的词,比如“好”---基本上用 good ,你可以考虑wonderful,great,excellent,splendid,brilliant等……