请帮忙看看下面两个英语文段有无语法或其他什么明显的错误?如有请指出并说明原因,
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请帮忙看看下面两个英语文段有无语法或其他什么明显的错误?如有请指出并说明原因,
如果能给出优美地道的修改方案那就再好不过了.
On the morning of April 29,2007,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of
students from primary,middle schools and universities all over China joined
in a national student sports program.Eleven million students in Jiangsu took
an active part in this program.
April 29,2007 kicked off a new national initiative to promote sports in
China.For one hour,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of students of
all ages joined in a national student sports program.In Jiangsu
province,eleven million students eagerly participated.
如果能给出优美地道的修改方案那就再好不过了.
On the morning of April 29,2007,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of
students from primary,middle schools and universities all over China joined
in a national student sports program.Eleven million students in Jiangsu took
an active part in this program.
April 29,2007 kicked off a new national initiative to promote sports in
China.For one hour,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of students of
all ages joined in a national student sports program.In Jiangsu
province,eleven million students eagerly participated.
![请帮忙看看下面两个英语文段有无语法或其他什么明显的错误?如有请指出并说明原因,](/uploads/image/z/17870426-26-6.jpg?t=%E8%AF%B7%E5%B8%AE%E5%BF%99%E7%9C%8B%E7%9C%8B%E4%B8%8B%E9%9D%A2%E4%B8%A4%E4%B8%AA%E8%8B%B1%E8%AF%AD%E6%96%87%E6%AE%B5%E6%9C%89%E6%97%A0%E8%AF%AD%E6%B3%95%E6%88%96%E5%85%B6%E4%BB%96%E4%BB%80%E4%B9%88%E6%98%8E%E6%98%BE%E7%9A%84%E9%94%99%E8%AF%AF%3F%E5%A6%82%E6%9C%89%E8%AF%B7%E6%8C%87%E5%87%BA%E5%B9%B6%E8%AF%B4%E6%98%8E%E5%8E%9F%E5%9B%A0%2C)
这个没必要修改. 因为已经很完美了.
joined 后面可以加个 together. Hundreds of millions of students.. joined together in a national..
第二段有个明显的错误.
第一句话的开头最好改为 : China kicked off a new national initiative on April 29, 2007 to promote..
另外 joined 后面也可以加个 together 这样比较顺.
~ ♥ 自己认真回答的,应该是正确的理解,敬请采纳、
joined 后面可以加个 together. Hundreds of millions of students.. joined together in a national..
第二段有个明显的错误.
第一句话的开头最好改为 : China kicked off a new national initiative on April 29, 2007 to promote..
另外 joined 后面也可以加个 together 这样比较顺.
~ ♥ 自己认真回答的,应该是正确的理解,敬请采纳、
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