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请以“吸烟有害健康”为题，写一篇短文，内容要求包括： 1. 现状：中国吸烟者约占将近一半，吸烟着越来越年轻，甚至有少数中学生也在吸烟； 2. 原因：有的人认为是时髦，有的人认为是乐趣，有的人认为可以提神 3. 害处：吸烟有害健康。可导致多种疾病，是一种金钱的浪费，甚至会引起火灾； 4. 建议：劝告大家不要吸烟。 满分为30，请老师打分 Nowadays, almost half of the chinese are smokers. It’s becoming a trend that more and more youngs get invovled into smoking., even the middle school students. They smoke for a varity of reasons. Some think smoking is a kind of fashione, some think it is fun while the others believe that they can refresh themselves by smoking. It is acknowledged that smoking is harmful to us for it will cause numerous diseas. What’s more, smoking need amount of money and sometimes it may lead to crimes. For more, it is estimated that nearly 65%fires are produced by careless smokers. Thus, we can define smoking as a transparent bad habit. There are some smokers on the verge of lung cancer, they should give up smoking as soon as possible. We should always keep away from cigars and cigretts.
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Nowadays, almost half of the chinese are smokers. It’s becoming a trend that more and more youngs get invovled into smoking., even the middle school students. They smoke for a varity of reasons. Some think smoking is a kind of fashione, some think it is fun while the others believe that they can refresh themselves by smoking. It is acknowledged that smoking is harmful to us for it will cause numerous diseas. What’s more, smoking need amount of money and sometimes it may lead to crimes. For more, it is estimated that nearly 65%fires are produced by careless smokers. Thus, we can define smoking as a transparent bad habit. There are some smokers on the verge of lung cancer, they should give up smoking as soon as possible.
We should always keep away from cigars and cigretts.
1、 改为Chinese
2、 改为young people young是形容词不能加s
3、 拼写错误，改成involved 。此处用get involved in 不恰当，这叫“卷入、陷入”吸烟应该说get into the habit of smoking
4、 改为variety 这个词组用的好！
5、 改为fashion
6、 改为diseases
7、 改为an amount 词组an amount of
8、 改为besides， 没有for more的插入语
9、 改为cigarettes
本文很成功。词汇量丰富，从句短语都很恰当。注意个别词的准确运用。有时候作文并不是都用大词才能叫好的。有些打字错误。25分。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续提问”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
英语的诀窍就是熟练，办法是多背多练。加油吧！Do your best and you can do the best!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Nowadays, almost half of the chinese are smokers. It’s becoming a trend that more and more youngs get invovled into smoking., even the middle school students. They smoke for a varity of reasons. Some think smoking is a kind of fashione, some think it is fun while the others believe that they can refresh themselves by smoking. It is acknowledged that smoking is harmful to us for it will cause numerous diseas. What’s more, smoking need amount of money and sometimes it may lead to crimes. For more, it is estimated that nearly 65%fires are produced by careless smokers. Thus, we can define smoking as a transparent bad habit. There are some smokers on the verge of lung cancer, they should give up smoking as soon as possible.
We should always keep away from cigars and cigretts.
1、 改为Chinese
2、 改为young people young是形容词不能加s
3、 拼写错误，改成involved 。此处用get involved in 不恰当，这叫“卷入、陷入”吸烟应该说get into the habit of smoking
4、 改为variety 这个词组用的好！
5、 改为fashion
6、 改为diseases
7、 改为an amount 词组an amount of
8、 改为besides， 没有for more的插入语
9、 改为cigarettes
本文很成功。词汇量丰富，从句短语都很恰当。注意个别词的准确运用。有时候作文并不是都用大词才能叫好的。有些打字错误。25分。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续提问”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
英语的诀窍就是熟练，办法是多背多练。加油吧！Do your best and you can do the best!
最终答案：略