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Hello everyone im very happy to be in a same class with you,my chinese name is wangte .my english name is trista .it means a girl who can use the smile to defuse sadness .but actually i dont really like to laugh .so my previous classmates think im a little stiff.i graduate from huayu foreign language experimental school.there are five people in my family. My parents, grangparents and me .of course ,im the only child in my family. In my spare time ,i like to read novels.i think reading could enlargemy knowledge.in addition to reading,i also like to listen to music and watch tv play . and i love singing .I can play electronic organ,but not very well. In the past three years, I have learned a lot.But as soon as I walked into high school, I realized I need to learn more.So in the next three years I will be more struggling.I believe that the future to be with you will be more wonderful .thats all .thank you .

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Hello everyone im very happy to
be in a same class with you,my
chinese name is wangte .my
english name is trista .it means
a girl who can use the smile to
defuse sadness .but actually i
dont really like to laugh .so my
previous classmates think im a
little stiff.i graduate from huayu
foreign language experimental
school.there are five people in
my family. My parents,
grangparents and me .of course
,im the only child in my family.
In my spare time ,i like to read
novels.i think reading could
enlargemy knowledge.in
addition to reading,i also like to
listen to music and watch tv play .
and i love singing .I can play
electronic organ,but not very well.
In the past three years, I have
learned a lot.But as soon as I
walked into high school, I realized
I need to learn more.So in the
next three years I will be more
struggling.I believe that the future
to be with you will be more
wonderful .thats all .thank you .
文章写得很好，但是作为书面材料，一定要注意大小写。还有几处需要改动的。
Hello everyone， I’m very happy to
be in the same class with you,My
Chinese name is Wangte .My
English name is Trista .It means
a girl who can use the smile to
defense sadness .But actually I
don’t really like to laugh .So my
previous classmates think I’m a
little stiff.I graduated from Huayu
Eoreign Language Experimental
School.There are five people in
my family. My parents,
grangparents and me .Of course
,Im the only child in my family.
In my spare time ,I like to read
novels.I think reading could
enlarge my knowledge.In
addition to reading,I also like to
listen to music and watch TV play .
and I love singing .I can play
electronic organ,but not very well.
In the past three years, I have
learned a lot.But when I
go to high school, I think
I need to learn more.So in the
next three years I will be
working harder, I believe that the future
belongs to everyone as long as we are devoted to our study.that’s all .thank you .
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最终答案：略