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改错:i will go to college in the near future.after enter colle

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改错:
i will go to college in the near future.after enter college,and i plan to set new goals in my study and life.as i was away from my parents,it is necessary for me to learn live on my own,such as doing some washing,shopping and cleaning for myself.what's more,in my spare time,i will take part in different kind of school activities,for example,i will often go to English Corner to practice my spoken English.Besides,I'll try my best to get along well with your teachers and classmates.I'm sure if i will have a wonderful college life.Bless me!
改错:i will go to college in the near future.after enter colle
after entering,去掉and
some new goals for study and life
learn to live on my own,like washing,shopping and cleaning
i want to take part in some different kinds of activities,for example,i will go to the English Corner a lot to .
get along with my teacher.
i am sure that i will.
只检查了语法错误
还有就是别老i will这i will那的,太重复了,直接i want那些词也可以