求修改一下英语稿子,演讲滴,

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求修改一下英语稿子,演讲滴,
Hello every one!My first name is Jack,J-A-C-K,Jack.And my last name is Ye.Sure,but this is my English name.My favorite food?Oh!It’s mutton soup.This is Jianyang specialty.It’s very delicious.And my favorite sports?Uh~it’s swimming.I think it’s very important to the health.And my favorite subject is English,math and biology.I think biology is very interesting,and our biology teacher is very funny.For math,I think it’s too difficult,but it’s very research value.For English,I think it can let’s do diplomatic also can let our country more developed.And I like singing too.My favorite song is “My Heart Will Go On”.And my favorite singer is Jolin and Celine Dion.I sing is very good.
Thanks!
加了一点，还可以再加吗？

稿子没有什么错误.既然是演讲稿,更重要的是演讲的语气,神态,手势.其实也并不是很难,只要求自然,大方,得体,外加上大声自信的演讲即可.相信自己,能行的!
再问：可以再加一点吗？？？？
再答： but this is my English name.改成 and my chinese name is ······似乎顺口 And my favorite sports? 与上面重了好像不好改成 what is my my favorite sports thanks for listing ！ i hope we can make friends 。有些理由可以写的具体一点，还可以写自己性格之类的 l am outgoing and friendly。开头可以写自己的职业啊
再问： “and my chinese name is ······”我们演讲不能出现真实名字滴- -！！！！！！~~

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