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英语翻译这是原文的地址给点意见I left my soulThinking what you do and so onT

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英语翻译
这是原文的地址
给点意见
I left my soul
Thinking what you do and so on
Throughing what you dreamt and join in
That colors always unkown
I can't wait to go
Always open my eyes at night
And then you turn up to my mind
Why I love you whatever die?
That because your memoru and mine
As if you give me a smile
Obviously it is my style
I'm flying in the sky
I'm standing out of cry
Now I'm being quiet to observe my hands
There are many rubishes to land
I have to bring my body out from you eyes
Only my soul stayed
英语翻译这是原文的地址给点意见I left my soulThinking what you do and so onT
我很想知道你这首英文诗是从哪里来的.写的很乱,毫无章法可言.(很象是网络写手写的中式英语诗),也许在下眼拙,不识大家真迹吧,
而且你的翻译也是很多句子与原文不符.
你的翻译单独拿出来确实很是不错,有种清凉的美.
不过看上去更象是英文是从汉语诗中乱七八糟地翻译出来的.