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Dear Emily: I am sorry to hear that you have a bad cold.I am worried about your health.Let me tell you how to keep healthy. In my opinion,firstly get up early and go to bed early.Do morning exercise every day.Secondly,eat healthy foods,like fruit and vegetable.Do not eat too much meat,It has too much fat.Thirdly,drink lots of water,less than eight cups a day.Finally,If you don't felling well,lie down and have a good rest.Go to the doctor the faster the better. Best wishes for you! Your friend
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Dear Emily:
I am sorry to hear that you have a bad cold.I am worried about your health.Let me tell you how to keep healthy.
In my opinion,firstly get up early and go to bed early.Do morning exercise every day.Secondly,eat healthy foods（food）,like fruit and vegetable（ vegetables).Do not eat too much meat,It has too much fat.Thirdly,drink lots of water,less than (more than)eight cups a day.Finally,If you don't felling(feel) well,lie down and have a good rest.Go to the doctor.The faster ,the better.
Best wishes for you!
Your friend祝你的英语成绩越来越棒！
最终答案：略
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Dear Emily:
I am sorry to hear that you have a bad cold.I am worried about your health.Let me tell you how to keep healthy.
In my opinion,firstly get up early and go to bed early.Do morning exercise every day.Secondly,eat healthy foods（food）,like fruit and vegetable（ vegetables).Do not eat too much meat,It has too much fat.Thirdly,drink lots of water,less than (more than)eight cups a day.Finally,If you don't felling(feel) well,lie down and have a good rest.Go to the doctor.The faster ,the better.
Best wishes for you!
Your friend祝你的英语成绩越来越棒！
最终答案：略