麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,
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麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,
If I have 5 million RMB,what would i deal with it?
If I have 5 million RMB,it is hard to say what I would do,Maybe I can change my life,At first,I would buy a big house for my family.And,I would biring my whole family have a holiday,Then,I'll make a study plan and acquire as more training as possible,I think I don't have the capability to manger the large amount money,At last,I have to go to work.There are so many friends in the company.
If I have 5 million RMB,what would i deal with it?
If I have 5 million RMB,it is hard to say what I would do,Maybe I can change my life,At first,I would buy a big house for my family.And,I would biring my whole family have a holiday,Then,I'll make a study plan and acquire as more training as possible,I think I don't have the capability to manger the large amount money,At last,I have to go to work.There are so many friends in the company.
![麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,](/uploads/image/z/10071271-55-1.jpg?t=%E9%BA%BB%E7%83%A6%E5%B8%AE%E7%9C%8B%E4%B8%80%E4%B8%8B%E6%88%91%E5%86%99%E7%9A%84%E8%BF%99%E7%AF%87%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%E6%9C%89%E9%82%A3%E4%BA%9B%E8%AF%AD%E6%B3%95%E9%94%99%E8%AF%AF%2C%E6%88%91%E6%98%AF%E6%96%B0%E6%89%8B%2C)
第一行Maybe前面的逗号改成句号,At first前面的逗号改成句号.
第二行bring改成take,family后面加to.
第三行more改成much,possible后面的逗号改成句号.
第四行manager改成manage,At前面的逗号改成句号.
注意:逗号后面的句子第一个词小写,句号后面的句子第一个词要大写.
第二行bring改成take,family后面加to.
第三行more改成much,possible后面的逗号改成句号.
第四行manager改成manage,At前面的逗号改成句号.
注意:逗号后面的句子第一个词小写,句号后面的句子第一个词要大写.