搜搜考试网帮我看看我的英语广告是否有问题.
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帮我看看我的英语广告是否有问题.
NEED AN ENGLISH TEACHER
Hello,overseas!Can You Speak English?
I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practicing my spoken English for the TOEFL test witch I'll take next year.
You will get well paid.We can get together to negotiate for a fair price.
Additionally,we can make good friends.I can tell you anything you want to know about China.
I'm looking forward to your calling.
Tel:XXXXXXXXXXX
My Name:Burgess Chen
NEED AN ENGLISH TEACHER
Hello,overseas!Can You Speak English?
I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practicing my spoken English for the TOEFL test witch I'll take next year.
You will get well paid.We can get together to negotiate for a fair price.
Additionally,we can make good friends.I can tell you anything you want to know about China.
I'm looking forward to your calling.
Tel:XXXXXXXXXXX
My Name:Burgess Chen
I'm looking for an English speaking student as a teacher to help me practicing my spoken English for the TOEFL test witch I'll take next year.
as最好改为to be（因为学生还未当教师,用as译为 担任教师职务的学生）
practicing改为practice或practise
witch改为which 或that或直接省略
I'm looking forward to your calling .
calling只要call或phone call或phone number即可,无需动名词
as最好改为to be（因为学生还未当教师,用as译为 担任教师职务的学生）
practicing改为practice或practise
witch改为which 或that或直接省略
I'm looking forward to your calling .
calling只要call或phone call或phone number即可,无需动名词