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请帮忙指出:错误的地方、语法、重点句型以及建议.

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请帮忙指出:错误的地方、语法、重点句型以及建议.
Everyone has their own fear,and I also have.I used to be afraid to go swimming,because when I was young,I used to fall over the pond,then I drank a belly of water,and then I was afraid to swim.But just last year,things have changed in my friend's help,I overcame the difficulties,sincethen,I am no longer afraid of swimming.
不是错误的语法重点句型。
请帮忙指出:错误的地方、语法、重点句型以及建议.
But just last year,things have changed in my friend's help ,改成things changed with the help of my friend.很硬写的东西,多背点英文文章吧