Students from poor backgound such as rural areas ofen find i

Students from poor backgound such as rural areas ofen find it difficult to access to university education,so people think universities should make it easy for them to study at.To what extent do you agerr or disagree?
It is always a huga challenge for sme students who come from undeveloped region pursuing higher education in uinvercicy or other institue.Because of this phenomena,some people give their suggests that nunivercity shoulid set up a low entrance for enable those student who come from poor background get in easily .this agrument may be ture..
People advocated this ideal argued that there ara few advanced education resources and basic teaching facilities in this area,this lead to students there had not been instructed better in the coures of elementary and secondary school compared with those in the large city.Therefore give them an easily access for studying in the colleage,bing essential for guaranteeing equality in the socity as a whole.In fact however ,there are merely part of truth.
The purpose of niversity is to give student porfessinal knowledge which related to certain specilized area,such as chemistry or physic,therefore it must select those students who possess adequate qualification .student lacked basic education more likely do not accomplish the courses in university.Moreover,making the entrance more easily to get in ,this may lead to damage the ruputation of college.Consequently,some large company and social organization will not willing put fund on them,it can cause these higher institute lose significant number of money.Because of this ,they may have not enough ability for attracting outstanding professors or academic teachers,by this,the benefit of all students will be harmed to some extent.
From what have been disccused above ,we my safely draw a conclusin that to make all student participating in the higher education is ont an idea choice it is also unrealistic .the better way is government create more education resouces in the undeveloped area.Only by do this ,can student from different background acquire the equal treating in terms of education.

首先,你有很多词都拼错了,例如：university（大学）等等,建议你先贴到word里看看~它有自动纠错和联想的功能.
其次,雅思写作,要在第一段最好就明确自己的观点.你是支持大学降低门槛的,那就在第一段就明确表示,I think universities should lower the entrance standard of the rural areas' students.你的第一段太长了.
再看议论的两段,你的道理说清楚了,但是,可以适当的加些对反方观点的反驳,全文会更加全面.
总体上,思路是清晰的,但是表达当中,很多词汇的用法,连接词得使用,都有待改进.要注意动名词的使用,还有名词冠词及复数的用法.
想帮你改的~但很多地方由于错误,不知道你要说什么~强烈建议你先用word纠一下错