搜搜考试网英语帝进来,看看这一段有什么语法错误啊.``````
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英语帝进来,看看这一段有什么语法错误啊.``````
Hi!everyone.Welcome to China!Welcome to my hometown my name is XXXX.I am a fourteen-year-old student from XXXXX Junior middle school .XXXX is my hometown ,of course ,I love here .Here is a good place to visit .I hope you’re enjoying your stay here .Finally I think I can know more about the US in this activity.
我又重写，看看怎么样
Hi!everybody,welcome to my hometown Yuexi.My name is Cheng Liuli.Now I am fourteen from Tiantang junior high school,I am just a junior student there.
Yuexi is not only a country with a long history,but it is a good place to have a trip.I love here and I think you will also love it.I wish everybody of you will enjoy yourself and maybe you could talk to me about your lovely hometown as our friendship as return.
Hi!everyone.Welcome to China!Welcome to my hometown my name is XXXX.I am a fourteen-year-old student from XXXXX Junior middle school .XXXX is my hometown ,of course ,I love here .Here is a good place to visit .I hope you’re enjoying your stay here .Finally I think I can know more about the US in this activity.
我又重写，看看怎么样
Hi!everybody,welcome to my hometown Yuexi.My name is Cheng Liuli.Now I am fourteen from Tiantang junior high school,I am just a junior student there.
Yuexi is not only a country with a long history,but it is a good place to have a trip.I love here and I think you will also love it.I wish everybody of you will enjoy yourself and maybe you could talk to me about your lovely hometown as our friendship as return.
是想向外国朋友介绍你自己和家乡,同时与对方交友,是吧?
语法不是你表达的关键问题,而是语气语感,正是因为太过分强调规范的用语用词,所以通篇讲述出来的感觉,都太过生硬中文化.
按照美国人的习惯,照你需要的重写这段文,千万切记.交流交流,不管哪种语言,交流的内容永远是最重要的,形式永远次之.对于母语的人,无论你如何语无伦次,对方都能根据你的身体语言神态情景关键词,猜个八九不离十,所以这就是我个人的体会.努力讲些对你对对方而言,更重要的内容,才是交流中应该重视的问题.
hi,everybody,welcome here(welcome to china.如果非得强调到‘中国’这一特殊地域,就加上吧,其实来的人都知道,何必再生硬地强调,还不如把CHINA换成当地的具体地名,更让人感兴趣)welcome to my hometown xxx(你家乡的具体地名,可以只转换成拼音即可)!this is/i'm XXX(报上你的名+姓【拼音或译名】,做个简单自我介绍,eg.now i'm fourteen fm xxx school,i'm just a junior student there.i'm pround of this place,not only because it's my hometown,but for its impressing site-seeing and long history and blabla...bla[你家乡的特点,自己挑选最想介绍的简要讲吧],等你描述完了,对方自然会体会到你家乡的美好,另外也会从你自豪的语气中,得出这个结论,所以.i love here,here is a good place to visit什么的,就分解成家乡的具体介绍融汇进你们的对话中吧,别再像初学英文似的生硬表达了,对方反而会认为你们安排的接待不够隆重,会想为什么不找个英文地道的同学过来介绍呢?那样,会和你追求的结果适得其反吧?介绍的最后,可以讲讲你对对方这次来访的美好祝愿.i wish everyone of you a nice and comfortable journey / visit.and looking forward to be your friend fm this precious opportunity,and maybe you could talk to me about your lovely hometown as our friendship gift as return.(最后一句用比较调侃轻松但立场坚定的口气,既能表达你希望进一步了解对方的愿望,又带点意外的幽默,在这种昂扬的语气下,表达出你接触对方了解对方的坚定愿望.在让对方意外的愉快表达之外,开怀的气氛最适合增进彼此的深入交流.这是实践得来的真知.)
希望,有所帮助~
语法不是你表达的关键问题,而是语气语感,正是因为太过分强调规范的用语用词,所以通篇讲述出来的感觉,都太过生硬中文化.
按照美国人的习惯,照你需要的重写这段文,千万切记.交流交流,不管哪种语言,交流的内容永远是最重要的,形式永远次之.对于母语的人,无论你如何语无伦次,对方都能根据你的身体语言神态情景关键词,猜个八九不离十,所以这就是我个人的体会.努力讲些对你对对方而言,更重要的内容,才是交流中应该重视的问题.
hi,everybody,welcome here(welcome to china.如果非得强调到‘中国’这一特殊地域,就加上吧,其实来的人都知道,何必再生硬地强调,还不如把CHINA换成当地的具体地名,更让人感兴趣)welcome to my hometown xxx(你家乡的具体地名,可以只转换成拼音即可)!this is/i'm XXX(报上你的名+姓【拼音或译名】,做个简单自我介绍,eg.now i'm fourteen fm xxx school,i'm just a junior student there.i'm pround of this place,not only because it's my hometown,but for its impressing site-seeing and long history and blabla...bla[你家乡的特点,自己挑选最想介绍的简要讲吧],等你描述完了,对方自然会体会到你家乡的美好,另外也会从你自豪的语气中,得出这个结论,所以.i love here,here is a good place to visit什么的,就分解成家乡的具体介绍融汇进你们的对话中吧,别再像初学英文似的生硬表达了,对方反而会认为你们安排的接待不够隆重,会想为什么不找个英文地道的同学过来介绍呢?那样,会和你追求的结果适得其反吧?介绍的最后,可以讲讲你对对方这次来访的美好祝愿.i wish everyone of you a nice and comfortable journey / visit.and looking forward to be your friend fm this precious opportunity,and maybe you could talk to me about your lovely hometown as our friendship gift as return.(最后一句用比较调侃轻松但立场坚定的口气,既能表达你希望进一步了解对方的愿望,又带点意外的幽默,在这种昂扬的语气下,表达出你接触对方了解对方的坚定愿望.在让对方意外的愉快表达之外,开怀的气氛最适合增进彼此的深入交流.这是实践得来的真知.)
希望,有所帮助~