哪位大侠帮忙看下这篇英语短文有米有错误.
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哪位大侠帮忙看下这篇英语短文有米有错误.
Respectable Kyoto Animation Company:
I am a high school student from China.
Recently I am facinated about "Suzumiya Haruhi".Especially the animation which is made in your company.So I wonder if your company can tell me the details about the Suzumiya Haruhi's next movie.
It's my honour that give the question to KA Company.
I hope to receive your company reply soon.
Best wishes to KA comany!
Sincerely,
再帮忙检查下哪些用语可以更礼貌些,感激不尽!
Respectable Kyoto Animation Company:
I am a high school student from China.
Recently I am facinated about "Suzumiya Haruhi".Especially the animation which is made in your company.So I wonder if your company can tell me the details about the Suzumiya Haruhi's next movie.
It's my honour that give the question to KA Company.
I hope to receive your company reply soon.
Best wishes to KA comany!
Sincerely,
再帮忙检查下哪些用语可以更礼貌些,感激不尽!
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".Especially the animation which is made in your company——》 ".Especially the animation made in your company
that give the question to KA Company——》 to contract with KA Company
I hope to receive your company reply soon.——》
I hope to receive your company's reply soon.
最后的改动可以用 it's such my hounor for me to contract you and hope you can have a nice day .yours sincerely .对了,该用句号的就不要用逗号 了
再问: contract?应该是contect吧……
that give the question to KA Company——》 to contract with KA Company
I hope to receive your company reply soon.——》
I hope to receive your company's reply soon.
最后的改动可以用 it's such my hounor for me to contract you and hope you can have a nice day .yours sincerely .对了,该用句号的就不要用逗号 了
再问: contract?应该是contect吧……