作业帮 > 英语 > 作业

My DreamEveryone has dreams.Some people want to be the rich,

来源:学生作业帮 编辑:搜搜考试网作业帮 分类:英语作业 时间:2024/07/05 09:31:34
My Dream
Everyone has dreams.Some people want to be the rich,and dream of becoming millionaires overnight.Others want to be famous,dreaming of suddenly achieving great reputation.I have a lot of dreams too.When I was a young girl,I dreamed of becoming a scientist in future.However my dream is more realistic that I want to teach foreigners Chinese .It will be so wonderful because I can convey our native language and local culture to the world.Therefore,I studied so hard from middle school to university that I can catch my ideal.
Although the knowledge is very difficult,I never give up .I reading so many books in order to obtain more knowledge.I cherish every chance to talk with foreigners in order to practice my oral language.No pains no gains.I have made great progress at present.As long as I focus on my dream and make continuous efforts,I believe,my dream will come true in the near future.
还有没有什么问题,最好再补充一下(要全抄下来修改或补充)我会给50分的,我才上初一不要写到大学去!
My DreamEveryone has dreams.Some people want to be the rich,
My Dream
Everyone has dreams.Some people want to be the rich,and dream of becoming millionaires overnight.Others want to be famous,dream of (注意前后一致哦) suddenly achieving great reputation.I have a lot of dreams,too.When I was a young girl,I dreamed of becoming a scientist in the future(in future主要是指从今以后,今后;in the future才是在将来的意思).
However,(however后面注意打逗号哦~) my dream is more realistic that I want to teach foreigners Chinese.It will be so wonderful because I can convey our native language and local culture to the world.Therefore,I will do my best to study language from middle school to university so that I can realize my ideal.(这一句做了一点修改)
Although the knowledge is very difficult,I never give up.I have read so many books in order to obtain more knowledge.(I reading?) I cherish every chance to talk with foreigners in order to practice my spoken language.(口语) No pains no gains.I have made great progress at present.As long as I focus on my dream and make continuous efforts,I believe my dream will come true in the near future.
分成三段看起来更整洁,如果是初一的同学你写的内容就足够了,不用拓展得太深入.