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麻烦你们帮我看一下这道英语 改错题； when traveling ,l take the following things ,which is my c...
麻烦你们帮我看一下这道英语
改错题；
when traveling ,l take the following things ,which is my camera,a compass and some clothes .l think the ID card is used to taking pictures or record that we want .after we return home and take out pictures or recordings ,so they can bring us a lot funs .the compass is very essential of us to travel in the forests .without them ,we may get lost .and CD player is either very important for of to kill time when on the train or the plane .besides ,l had to bring one or two coats when traveling to different places
麻烦你们帮我看一下这道英语
改错题；
when traveling ,l take the following things ,which is my camera,a compass and some clothes .l think the ID card is used to taking pictures or record that we want .after we return home and take out pictures or recordings ,so they can bring us a lot funs .the compass is very essential of us to travel in the forests .without them ,we may get lost .and CD player is either very important for of to kill time when on the train or the plane .besides ,l had to bring one or two coats when traveling to different places
When traveling,I (1/take) the following things,which (2/is) my camera,a compass and some clothes.I think the ID card is used (3/to taking) pictures or record that we want.After we return home and take out pictures or recordings,(4/so) they can bring us a lot (5/-) funs.The compass is very essential (6/of) us to travel in the forests.Without them,we may get lost.And CD player is (7/either) very important for (8/of) to kill time when on the train or (9/the) plane.Besides,I (10/had) to bring one or two coats when traveling to different places
共有10处的错误（已用括号标出）.
1.take 前加will
2.which指代复数名词things,把is改为are
3.或者把to改为for,即is used for taking；或者把taking 改为take,即is used to take
4.after 引导的是状语从句,删去so把后面的句子变成主句
5.不能说a lot funs,改为a lot of funs
6.把of 改为for,即The compass is very essential for us to travel
7.either用在否定句的句尾,此处是肯定句,改为also
8.与第三处错误大体相同,把for 后的of 改为us
9.train 和 plane 是介词的并列宾语,只需要一个冠词,删去plane 前的the
10.全文都是现在时态,此处也应该如此,把had 改为 have
共有10处的错误（已用括号标出）.
1.take 前加will
2.which指代复数名词things,把is改为are
3.或者把to改为for,即is used for taking；或者把taking 改为take,即is used to take
4.after 引导的是状语从句,删去so把后面的句子变成主句
5.不能说a lot funs,改为a lot of funs
6.把of 改为for,即The compass is very essential for us to travel
7.either用在否定句的句尾,此处是肯定句,改为also
8.与第三处错误大体相同,把for 后的of 改为us
9.train 和 plane 是介词的并列宾语,只需要一个冠词,删去plane 前的the
10.全文都是现在时态,此处也应该如此,把had 改为 have
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