英语翻译How to motivate enterprise internal energy and integrate

英语翻译
How to motivate enterprise internal energy and integrate external resources are important issues which modern enterprise directors should consider.
BBB platform,Construct a interactive platform between customers and partners,help enterprises innovation,Maintain better relationship with customers,enhance conglutination between enterprise and customer,smoothly achieve a win-win situation for a better future.and displays the flexible and efficient concept in business operation.The enterprise cannot carry exaggerated or false propaganda.Any unreal propaganda will be exposed within shorest period.
On the competitive market,the enterprise must follow the rule of authenticity in their publicizing.The enterprise cannot carry exaggerated or false propaganda.Any unreal propaganda will be exposed in the Internet ,That's not a good thing for some large scale enterprise.
如何激发企业内部的活力,整合外界的资源,是现代企业管理者考虑的重要问题.
通过bbb平台,构建一个客户以及合作伙伴之间的互动平台空间,帮助企业推动创新、更好的维护客户关系,增加企业和客户间的粘合度,顺利实现共赢.同时也展示了企业在经营过程中非常灵活有效经验理念.
在竞争激烈的市场上,企业在宣传上必须遵从真实性原则.企业不能进行夸大甚至是虚假的宣传,任何不真实的宣传都会在最短的时间被消费者揭穿,并且以最快的速度在互联网上传播,尤其是对于那些大型的、与国计民生相关的企业.

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How to motivate enterprise internal energy and integrate external resources
are important issues which modern enterprise directors should consider.
如何激发企业内部的活力,整合外界的资源,是现代企业管理者考虑的重要问题.
directors可以译为董事
should的语气可以加上去,即'应当考虑的...'
BBB platform, Construct a interactive platform between customers and partners,
help enterprises innovation, Maintain better relationship with customers,
enhance conglutination between enterprise and customer, smoothly achieve
a win-win situation for a better future. and displays the flexible and efficient
concept in business operation. The enterprise cannot carry exaggerated or
false propaganda. Any unreal propaganda will be exposed within shorest period.
通过bbb平台,构建一个客户以及合作伙伴之间的互动平台空间,帮助企业推动创新、
更好的维护客户关系,增加企业和客户间的粘合度,顺利实现共赢.同时也展示了
企业在经营过程中非常灵活有效经验理念.
维护更好的审户关系
粘合度是直译,可否意译
for a better future没有反映出来
顺利地为更好的将来实现双赢
The enterprise cannot carry exaggerated or false propaganda. Any unreal
propaganda will be exposed within shortest period.
这句遣漏了
企业不可以用上夸大或失实的宣传.任何虚假的宣传在最短的期间内便会曝露.
On the competitive market, the enterprise must follow the rule of authenticity
in their publicizing. The enterprise cannot carry exaggerated or false propaganda.
Any unreal propaganda will be exposed in the Internet , That's not a good
thing for some large scale enterprise.
在竞争激烈的市场上,企业在宣传上必须遵从真实性原则.企业不能进行夸大甚至
是虚假的宣传,任何不真实的宣传都会在最短的时间被消费者揭穿,并且以最快的
速度在互联网上传播,尤其是对于那些大型的、与国计民生相关的企业.
‘甚至’宜简单的使用‘或’
任何不真实的宣传都会在最短的时间被消费者揭穿,并且以最快的速度在互联网上
传播
这句有原文没有的内容
任何不真实的宣传将会在互联网上被揭穿
尤其是对于那些大型的、与国计民生相关的企业.
没有'尤其‘的意思
没有’与国计民生相关的企业‘的意思
That's not a good thing for some large scale enterprise.
这对大规模企业不是好事.