英语达人进!帮我看看有没有语法错误~
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英语达人进!帮我看看有没有语法错误~
The thing I most cherish is this bracelet.My parents brought it to me from Shanghai.This bracelet is made of silver,it is not very expensive.When I got this bracelet,I felt so happy ,because it is the first time that my parents have bought the jewelry to me.I love my parents,I love my family.
The thing I most cherish is this bracelet.My parents brought it to me from Shanghai.This bracelet is made of silver,it is not very expensive.When I got this bracelet,I felt so happy ,because it is the first time that my parents have bought the jewelry to me.I love my parents,I love my family.
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This bracelet is made of silver,(yet) it is not very expensive. 缺连词
When I (received) this bracelet,I felt so happy ,because it (was) the first time that my parents have bought (a) jewelry to me. 注意时态和单复数
(Therefore) I love my parents. 毋须重复,且增加连贯性
欢迎交流~
When I (received) this bracelet,I felt so happy ,because it (was) the first time that my parents have bought (a) jewelry to me. 注意时态和单复数
(Therefore) I love my parents. 毋须重复,且增加连贯性
欢迎交流~