搜搜考试网请问老师第一篇照第二篇有没有进步?可以的话还请指出错误,
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请问老师第一篇照第二篇有没有进步?可以的话还请指出错误,
A Campaign Speech
1 你认为自己具备是什么条件（能力,性格,爱好）可以胜任学生会主席工作2 如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么?
I‘m very glad to join in this election,first,i think that i have some excellent condition【s】 to be adequate for this chairman of the studentunion,and i'm confident to deal with every trouble well,if i succeeded in this election.I think my strength has arisen from two following aspects.In the first place,my interest is very comprehensive,which ranges from sport to math,i would be positive to give other a hand when other faces some trouble in math or other courses.In the next place,I’m able to build a good communication between students and teachers.Course of【of course】,I also have some shortcomings,I would try my best to overcome it.If I succeeded in this election,I would focus my attention on creating a good condition of learning,which would enable us to be active in learning
A Campaign Speech
1 你认为自己具备是什么条件（能力,性格,爱好）可以胜任学生会主席工作2 如果当选你将会为本校同学做什么?
I‘m very glad to join in this election,first,i think that i have some excellent condition【s】 to be adequate for this chairman of the studentunion,and i'm confident to deal with every trouble well,if i succeeded in this election.I think my strength has arisen from two following aspects.In the first place,my interest is very comprehensive,which ranges from sport to math,i would be positive to give other a hand when other faces some trouble in math or other courses.In the next place,I’m able to build a good communication between students and teachers.Course of【of course】,I also have some shortcomings,I would try my best to overcome it.If I succeeded in this election,I would focus my attention on creating a good condition of learning,which would enable us to be active in learning
第一篇有好多个错误哦~不知道你自己发现没有~
这一篇一开始你就写了first,但是后面没有second,third,就是自己的有点没有很清楚一天一条列清楚~而且写作文最好不要用i think 这样的开头~然后就是逗号好多,有些一个句子完了都没有用句号
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这一篇一开始你就写了first,但是后面没有second,third,就是自己的有点没有很清楚一天一条列清楚~而且写作文最好不要用i think 这样的开头~然后就是逗号好多,有些一个句子完了都没有用句号
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