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英语作文求修改 题目What do you value most?

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英语作文求修改 题目What do you value most?
It’s an interesting question I have to say,
because I spend most of time in college to find out the answer.When we talk
about life,there are always some words come into our mind,like dream,ambition,
money,goals and some word like that:looks very meaningful but useless in this
question.I try many ways to figure out the question,even make a mathematic
equation and solve in micro-economic way.After all,I realize that there is no
standard answer for everyone,but in my case,I think it is happiness.Life is
short and there is no time machine.I still don’t know what the optimal answer
in my world,but I do know what kind of man I want to be; like the famous
saying in “How the Steel Was Tempered”:When you look back at your life,you
will have no regrets over any time you wasted.Nor will you feel ashamed of notaccomplishing anything.
英语作文求修改 题目What do you value most?
It’s an interesting question I have to say,
because I spend most of time in college to find out the answer.When we talk
about life,there are always some words cominng into our minds,like dreams,ambitions,
money,goals and some words like those,which look very meaningful but useless in this
question.I try many ways to figure out the question,even make a mathematic
equation and solve in a micro-economic way.At last,I realize that there is no
standard answer for everything,but in my case,I think it is happiness.Life is
short and there is no time machine.I still don’t know what the optimal answer is
in my world,but I do know what kind of man I want to be; like the famous
saying in “How the Steel Was Tempered”:When you look back at your life,you
will have no regrets over any time you had wasted.Nor will you feel ashamed of not accomplishing anything.
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再问: .................你除了改了AT LAST还有改什么。。
再答: 额 我只是像修改病句一样做了点修改,意思倒是没在意。你可以对比下,有的要用复数,有的词不合适,有的少了东西。最后一句本来想改成虚拟语气来的,结果没改回来那个had。。