搜搜考试网请帮忙看下我的英语作文,
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请帮忙看下我的英语作文,
第一篇：
Ann'family photo
Look at the photo.This is my pen pal Ann post mine photo.The photo is her family's photo.There are Mr Read and Mrs Read,they're Ann's parents.Ann's brother is in front of the Mrs Read.He is very lovely.This is my pen pal Ann's family photo.
第二篇：
My bedroom
I have a big bedroom.It's very beautiful.There is a bed in the bedroom.The desk is near the bed.My computer is on the desk.My cat is under the desk.There is a big bookcase in my bedroom.There are many books in the it.And there is a chair on the floor.The baseball under the chair.Look!That's my family photo on the wall.My father,mother and me are in the photo.I like my bedroom very well.How about you?
请帮我评改下,再问下“这就是我的家”用英文怎么写
第一篇：
Ann'family photo
Look at the photo.This is my pen pal Ann post mine photo.The photo is her family's photo.There are Mr Read and Mrs Read,they're Ann's parents.Ann's brother is in front of the Mrs Read.He is very lovely.This is my pen pal Ann's family photo.
第二篇：
My bedroom
I have a big bedroom.It's very beautiful.There is a bed in the bedroom.The desk is near the bed.My computer is on the desk.My cat is under the desk.There is a big bookcase in my bedroom.There are many books in the it.And there is a chair on the floor.The baseball under the chair.Look!That's my family photo on the wall.My father,mother and me are in the photo.I like my bedroom very well.How about you?
请帮我评改下,再问下“这就是我的家”用英文怎么写
Ann'family photo
Look at the photo.This is the photo that my pen pal Ann sent to me.The photo is her family photo.There are Mr Read and Mrs Read,and they're Ann's parents.Ann's brother is in front of Mrs Read.He is very lovely.This is my pen pal Ann's family photo.
改完了.
I have a big bedroom.It's very beautiful.There is a bed in the bedroom.The desk is near the bed.My computer is on the desk.My cat is under the desk.There is a big bookcase in my bedroom.There are many books on it.And there is a chair on the floor.The baseball is under the chair.Look!That's my family photo on the wall.My father,my mother and I are in the photo.I like my bedroom very much.How about your?
这也改完了.你自己看吧.
这就是我家.this is my family.
楼主明鉴.
Look at the photo.This is the photo that my pen pal Ann sent to me.The photo is her family photo.There are Mr Read and Mrs Read,and they're Ann's parents.Ann's brother is in front of Mrs Read.He is very lovely.This is my pen pal Ann's family photo.
改完了.
I have a big bedroom.It's very beautiful.There is a bed in the bedroom.The desk is near the bed.My computer is on the desk.My cat is under the desk.There is a big bookcase in my bedroom.There are many books on it.And there is a chair on the floor.The baseball is under the chair.Look!That's my family photo on the wall.My father,my mother and I are in the photo.I like my bedroom very much.How about your?
这也改完了.你自己看吧.
这就是我家.this is my family.
楼主明鉴.