搜搜考试网英语考研练习写了一篇英语作文,请指教
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英语考研练习写了一篇英语作文,请指教
This picture presents a impresive sense.a boat is driven by a boatman on the lake.there are two tourists are sitting on edge of the boat who are discarding rubbish into the lake.we can see so much garbage in the lake.what a immoral behavior.
Actually,in our life,we can find a lot of similar things.we dont have enough attentions to protect our weak enviorment.poeple also throw plastic bags everywhere.they just consider their convenience,not the public benefit.after our life have became more rich than passed time,our mroal is till less developed.when we travel in some amazing ancient architectures,fantastic natural mountains.we get happy form them.we should not do so much shameful behaviors to hurt them.
上面字数限制，还有一段
In my opinion,chinese people still need more education to learn how to living with natural firends.goverment should make more propre discipline to prevent people to destory enviroment and punish the people who are hurting our natrual friends.at last,we should learn to regulate ourself.
满分20，不知道能打个几分
This picture presents a impresive sense.a boat is driven by a boatman on the lake.there are two tourists are sitting on edge of the boat who are discarding rubbish into the lake.we can see so much garbage in the lake.what a immoral behavior.
Actually,in our life,we can find a lot of similar things.we dont have enough attentions to protect our weak enviorment.poeple also throw plastic bags everywhere.they just consider their convenience,not the public benefit.after our life have became more rich than passed time,our mroal is till less developed.when we travel in some amazing ancient architectures,fantastic natural mountains.we get happy form them.we should not do so much shameful behaviors to hurt them.
上面字数限制，还有一段
In my opinion,chinese people still need more education to learn how to living with natural firends.goverment should make more propre discipline to prevent people to destory enviroment and punish the people who are hurting our natrual friends.at last,we should learn to regulate ourself.
满分20，不知道能打个几分
第一个冠词就用错了 让我评分你这直接扣五分 第一句都不好好写.
there are two tourists are sitting 严重错误 一句用了两个动词 第二个are删掉才对 用现在分词做伴随状语
hurt好像是个不及物动词 不能直接加宾语的
after our life have became more rich than passed time,our mroal is till less developed这句我认为前面的after有问题 你再斟酌一下,我不确定 你自己拿主意
we get happy form them如果你想用happy做名词,那这应该是happiness
没有prevent sb to do 应该说prevent sb from doing
第三段你只会用should吗 我建议你下次写的时候,不要用should ,it is our duty to 也挺好 类似表达有很多 it is high time that 都可以
there are two tourists are sitting 严重错误 一句用了两个动词 第二个are删掉才对 用现在分词做伴随状语
hurt好像是个不及物动词 不能直接加宾语的
after our life have became more rich than passed time,our mroal is till less developed这句我认为前面的after有问题 你再斟酌一下,我不确定 你自己拿主意
we get happy form them如果你想用happy做名词,那这应该是happiness
没有prevent sb to do 应该说prevent sb from doing
第三段你只会用should吗 我建议你下次写的时候,不要用should ,it is our duty to 也挺好 类似表达有很多 it is high time that 都可以