搜搜考试网帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文,谢谢
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帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文,谢谢
The story mianly tells us the writer change himself and he is not a person who he used to be after he had a gap year and he learnt a lot from that year.
from my point of view,i strongly in favor of teenager who just graduated form senior high school should experience a gap year .The reason for this may be listed as follow. First of all ,teenagers had just gone through the examination which was in relation to all one's life ,may in need of reducing pressure and doing what he want to . What' more ,not only can traveller expand their horizon ,but teenares gain social knowledge as soon as possible .Last but not least ,it is necessary for teenaers to seek for his dream and realize what he want to be in the future .
As for me ,Beijing was the first place i hope to go sightseeing and eventuallu i realize my dream in summer holiday . The place of interests appeal to me owing to its history and storys,and i suddenly know that everything woule change and go forth step by step if you don't change youself .I am convinced that i coule create a better world. i showed great enthusiam of every challenge i face after that tour
希望英语好的同志帮忙改一下,包括单词,语法,句式用法,希望可以多给意见和修改方法.本人是准高三了,但英语一直不好,经历过高考的同志给一点英语学习意见和方法,特别是语法填空和作文
The story mianly tells us the writer change himself and he is not a person who he used to be after he had a gap year and he learnt a lot from that year.
from my point of view,i strongly in favor of teenager who just graduated form senior high school should experience a gap year .The reason for this may be listed as follow. First of all ,teenagers had just gone through the examination which was in relation to all one's life ,may in need of reducing pressure and doing what he want to . What' more ,not only can traveller expand their horizon ,but teenares gain social knowledge as soon as possible .Last but not least ,it is necessary for teenaers to seek for his dream and realize what he want to be in the future .
As for me ,Beijing was the first place i hope to go sightseeing and eventuallu i realize my dream in summer holiday . The place of interests appeal to me owing to its history and storys,and i suddenly know that everything woule change and go forth step by step if you don't change youself .I am convinced that i coule create a better world. i showed great enthusiam of every challenge i face after that tour
希望英语好的同志帮忙改一下,包括单词,语法,句式用法,希望可以多给意见和修改方法.本人是准高三了,但英语一直不好,经历过高考的同志给一点英语学习意见和方法,特别是语法填空和作文
真的,你英语果然很有问题,首段动词没有用过去式,第二段应该是l am in favor of 等等…错误太多,而且长句少用,显的繁琐!我高考作文满分,希望能帮助你…加我吧!903532807